I pick up my board. Zip up my wetsuit and make a beeline for the waves. I warm up by taking a few little waves as the tide turns from low to high i have done my dash and i am heading back in all day it has been britty bog standard until i see one building at the back i think to myself here's a go. As i paddel out fether the wave suddenly gets bigger and bigger i get to the top of it and i look down and think to myself is this a good idear. As i stand up on my board and i drop into it it feels like i am going faster than man has ever gone before i look behind me and it starts to barrel it looks magical i try go fast but the wave catches up with me so i take a big breath and fall of and paddle back to shore i think to myself that was a one of a lifetime opportunity.   

Tom welsh.

Tom welsh wins olympic bronze for new zealand in shot put with a throw of 21.36 meters long. Tom welsh is just an ordinary kiwi who is a part time bilder in christchurch. He is currently the nathaniel holder indoors and outdoors. He has currently set the new record for new zealand and oceania he made his breakthrough for shot put in winning bronze medal at the 2014 world indoor championship and tom welsh won gold medal in portland this year with a person beast of 21.78 meters long longest throw for new zealand.

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Mr Moore i know that we should be able to have gum at school. It's hard to think that you can't truss the leaders of the school to have a gum. Here are There reasons why we should be able to have gum at school My first reason is? It keeps our breath clean and smelling nife. It increase your heart rate and it helps our learning.

     Firstly Don't you hate it when someone turned up to school with their breath smelling like a wet dog well i do Just the other day mr D told us to talk in our group and one guy breath stinks. So that's why i am positive that we should have gum at school

     

     Secondly Gum is scientifically proven that it increase your heart rate gets more blood to the brain, which helps you think strate and be more alert.

     Thirdly gum helps with the students learning mosley memory. Re-search found that it helped our memory by 35% That could be the difference between getting a above or below standard for our reports.

     Mr moore i know what you're gonna say. “No the will stick it under the table” But i know why they do that it's because they are scared they will get court.

     In conclusion i will restate my three paragraphs for you good breath increased heart rate and helps with learning so that's why You! Mr moore should allow the year 7&8 or the whole school should be able to have gum.

Informative writing-Explains something.

Purpose:Create a resource for a year 5/6 students about how to be the best version of themselves in year 7/8.

Audience:year 5/6.

LG:Use examples from experience to help explain each topic you write about.

S.O.S

-Use language appropriate to your audience.

-Use effective and precise language to enhance the key message in your text.

-Include subtitles.

Do you, you year 5/6, ever think about what it will be like in the year 7/8? Well i am hear to tell you about what you should expect in the leader's part of school. Like what the step up is, also your attitude plays a big roll, and the leadership role you might get.

     Firstly, What is the step up? Well when being a leader or year 7/8 in the school, you are expected to finish of your work or do what you are not asked to do.

    Secondly, your attitude tells others how much respect you get. Also you need a can do attitude for writing reading math all subjects. If you don't we will get nowhere.

    Thirdly, leadership. Showing leadership is a big part of being a year 7/8  it will get you a long way because everyone looks up to as being a leader of the school and a role model for the younger ones.

    In conclusion i will restate my three paragraph firstly the step up, secondly your attitude is a big roll, thirdly leadership. So you year 5/6 better get ready because now u should know.

Informative writing- Explains something

Purpose: Inform you audience about an event in new zealand.

Audience: A person from another country.

L.G: Use sub titles to label your paragraphs.

S.O.S

- Have there clearly labeled paragraphs.

- Use rhetorical questions to engage the reader x2.

- Include examples.

Yes you. Have you ever heard about the feild days well it is for the country kiwis in new zealand if you don't know what the field days is well tune in and u will know, about what is the feild days, what is there, and the history of the field days.                                                                                                                                 

What is the feild days.                        

    Firstly .What is the feild days? Well it is an a event that any can endent it you have a ticket. It has held in hamilton it is mostly for people who are interested in farming.

What is at the feild days

    Secondly what is at the feild days?

Well it has thousands of things from tractors to motorbikes, new tech knowledge and most recent macherey. And a heap more.

The history of the field days.   

    Thirdly the field days have been consistently been going for 48 years with every year having new and existing technology. It has grown every year having more people and more business every year.  

   In conclusion i will restate my there paraphrase firstly what is the feild days secondly what is there thirdly the history of the field days. So will you take the risk and come on down to see what is happening at new zealand field days.

Yes you. Have you ever heard about the feild days well it is for the country kiwis in new zealand if you don't know what the field days is well tune in and u will know, about what is the feild days, what is there, and the history of the field days.                                                                                                                                 

What is the feild days.                        

    Firstly .What is the feild days? Well it is an a event that any can endent it you have a ticket. It has held in hamilton it is mostly for people who are interested in farming.

What is at the feild days

    Secondly what is at the feild days?

Well it has thousands of things from tractors to motorbikes, new tech knowledge and most recent macherey. And a heap more.

The history of the field days.   

    Thirdly the field days have been consistently been going for 48 years with every year having new and existing technology. It has grown every year having more people and more business every year.  

   In conclusion i will restate my there paraphrase firstly what is the feild days secondly what is there thirdly the history of the field days. So will you take the risk and come on down to see what is happening at new zealand field days.

Snow day

The heavy white flowery snow all around me covers me completely. My hair feels like if i touch it it would snap off. I get a flake down my back, but i am too cold to move. My mind stops like the cold blanket of snow is frezes it. I hear the delicate sound of nothing. The white blanket of snow looks like it never ending every way you look.  

L.G: Describe my senses during a specific moment

S.O.S: Describe each of my senses.
.see
.hear
.touch
.smell
.taste
The water absorbs into my shoes, It saccharated them. The rain pounds against my umbrella ringing my ears.The wet smell fills my nose. The rain drops fall onto my hand but disappearing immediately.

summer

The dense green bush shades the small glaring river.

From the blinding sun.

Not allowing a small pin to shine through.

The loud noise of cicadas ring my ears.

The fast pace river pound against the big large boulder.