Wednesday, 18 May 2016

Informative writing-Explains something.
Purpose:Create a resource for a year 5/6 students about how to be the best version of themselves in year 7/8.
Audience:year 5/6.
LG:Use examples from experience to help explain each topic you write about.
S.O.S
-Use language appropriate to your audience.
-Use effective and precise language to enhance the key message in your text.
-Include subtitles.

Do you, you year 5/6, ever think about what it will be like in the year 7/8? Well i am hear to tell you about what you should expect in the leader's part of school. Like what the step up is, also your attitude plays a big roll, and the leadership role you might get.

     Firstly, What is the step up? Well when being a leader or year 7/8 in the school, you are expected to finish of your work or do what you are not asked to do.

    Secondly, your attitude tells others how much respect you get. Also you need a can do attitude for writing reading math all subjects. If you don't we will get nowhere.

    Thirdly, leadership. Showing leadership is a big part of being a year 7/8  it will get you a long way because everyone looks up to as being a leader of the school and a role model for the younger ones.

    In conclusion i will restate my three paragraph firstly the step up, secondly your attitude is a big roll, thirdly leadership. So you year 5/6 better get ready because now u should know.

Thursday, 12 May 2016


Informative writing- Explains something
Purpose: Inform you audience about an event in new zealand.
Audience: A person from another country.
L.G: Use sub titles to label your paragraphs.
S.O.S
- Have there clearly labeled paragraphs.
- Use rhetorical questions to engage the reader x2.
- Include examples.

Yes you. Have you ever heard about the feild days well it is for the country kiwis in new zealand if you don't know what the field days is well tune in and u will know, about what is the feild days, what is there, and the history of the field days.                                                                                                                                 
What is the feild days.                        
    Firstly .What is the feild days? Well it is an a event that any can endent it you have a ticket. It has held in hamilton it is mostly for people who are interested in farming.

What is at the feild days
    Secondly what is at the feild days?
Well it has thousands of things from tractors to motorbikes, new tech knowledge and most recent macherey. And a heap more.

The history of the field days.   
    Thirdly the field days have been consistently been going for 48 years with every year having new and existing technology. It has grown every year having more people and more business every year.  

   In conclusion i will restate my there paraphrase firstly what is the feild days secondly what is there thirdly the history of the field days. So will you take the risk and come on down to see what is happening at new zealand field days.
Yes you. Have you ever heard about the feild days well it is for the country kiwis in new zealand if you don't know what the field days is well tune in and u will know, about what is the feild days, what is there, and the history of the field days.                                                                                                                                 
What is the feild days.                        
    Firstly .What is the feild days? Well it is an a event that any can endent it you have a ticket. It has held in hamilton it is mostly for people who are interested in farming.


What is at the feild days
    Secondly what is at the feild days?
Well it has thousands of things from tractors to motorbikes, new tech knowledge and most recent macherey. And a heap more.


The history of the field days.   
    Thirdly the field days have been consistently been going for 48 years with every year having new and existing technology. It has grown every year having more people and more business every year.  

   In conclusion i will restate my there paraphrase firstly what is the feild days secondly what is there thirdly the history of the field days. So will you take the risk and come on down to see what is happening at new zealand field days.